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No no no!

Why do kids come on here and try to animate when they know they can't? Work on your skills, try again, keep the idea, it's could be funny, just work on your skills, add REAL voices, you won't be the next Joe Zombie okay? Just stop, work on your skills, and try again.

Sorry dude

Not feelin' it. Work on your animation skills, example, the walking..... Nobody wants to see a guy that just goes from side to side and is "walking". The story line makes no sense..... No try again with a different everything, keep you animation STYLE, not the way you animate mind you, but the way you design your characters, that was a pretty good design, just work on it a little bit, and build up your skill.

jvbl responds:

Thanks man.....
We are allways glad to get helpful reviews =D I totally agree with you, it was actually pretty good design. Next movie we shall try again with a different everything;)

Not too bad just...

Add some music or something. Great work though, you can tell some real time and talent went into this. Also if you're making a gadget, make it to where the user controls it, don't make it a movie, make it an interactive game.

That was good!

I like your animation style. Haha and good use of ADHD "Oh man that cat's..... OH MY GOD A BUTTERFLY!!" lol that's great dude keep up the good work!

Hmm

Good animation, not enough going one though. You should try making it with a few more sheep, and then they fight back, that'd be pretty funny. I also noticed your radar, when you do a movie clip don't make the last frame identical to the first, my advice, cut off the last frame and it will look like it's going around and around. Good idea though.

Don't Understand.

I don't understand why someone would want to watch a guy play a board game..... Boring! Do some animating!

MrScriblam responds:

nah

Work on it

This could be good if you optimize it a little bit, give 'em faces and voices, give 'em arms and maybe hands to hold the yo-yo, keep the idea, and repost it when you've built your skill a little bit. I wanna see this up in a month or so with some better graphics okay?!

SimpleStuff responds:

I have thought about redoing this, but not in a month. I have another project I want to finish. Thank you for the review!

Work on it.

Work on your animation and repost it. It's a great flash vid, it just needs better animation. And try getting a Mario Bros Remix, a box version not a live one. You could probly use sprites, that'd make it pretty nice lol. I like the part at the end though "T-Rex Killed by Luigi" keep that!

JustMoney responds:

thanks man.
i'm thinking about completly redrawing the whole cartoon

That's funny!

Wow! That was pretty good man! Great job!

Very Funny.

I like the dry humor of this! It's excellent, it doesn't make you laugh like hugely, but it does something inside that just makes it like no other comedy, truly excellent!

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